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The Mall:Chapter one part TWO

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We flew over the first set of stairs and landed on the second with a loud

CRASH!

The bike rattled and shook, and fell in the same manner on the third and fourth set. Gakupo, of all things, was laughing and yelling, while I shook and screamed. I finally managed to open my eyes as we fell down the fifth set of stairs. Everything was moving so fast, I couldn't look at just one thing. Wow, I thought. "That was awesome!" I exclaimed as we rolled down the final set of stairs. "Told you!" he teased,
"And we also made it to the mall!" I couldn't believe it. "We finally made it!" I sighed happily.
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I wish this day would never end. I want him here, with me, I thought.
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"Thanks so much Gakupo!"I exclaimed for the fifth time. "He he, Anytime Luka, anytime!" he grinned." "Well, now I have to wait for Mi-" "Hey! Luka! Over here!" I turned around. There standing at the Mall entrance, was Miku, Rin, Meiko, Teto, Neru, Gumi and Haku, all waving. I took my phone out. "12:00 sharp!" I laughed."Oh Gakupo! We made it!" I said, and hugged him."So, maybe we could go out sometime when you're not busy, you know, like… on a date." he said, a bit nervous."I'd love too!"I laughed. He smiled, relieved. I hadn't noticed that clouds had gotten even darker. And, before I knew it, it started to rain hard. I had forgotten that the girls were still here.
"C'mon Luka! We're getting all wet!" they screamed.
"Well, I guess this is good-bye." he said, a little disappointed. I hugged him again."Don't be sad." I reassured him, smiling."H-Here" I took the umbrella out from my bag and handed it to him. "Thanks." He smiled. "Bye."I said, and I ran to my friends.
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I can't believe I did that, I thought to myself.

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"Bye."I mumbled, but she was already talking to her friends.I stared down at the umbrella.Pink and fish covered...Well, better open it up, I thought. I opened the umbrella, and a rolled up paper flew out from it. I caught it just before it hit the wet floor. What's this, I wondered. I opened the paper. I couldn't believe it. 555-456-9867. Her phone number. I looked up. She was the last one to enter the mall. She turned around and signaled with her hand. I smiled for I knew it almost immediately.
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Call me.
:bulletpink::bulletgreen:Once again, Enjoy~:bulletpink::bulletgreen:
EDIT Gakupo's narrating the end!:)

Okay,So here's part two!:D
I kinda forgot this part..sorry!:icononionfailplz:
Fail.I am full of fail Do you think it's okay?Is it good?Or does it fail comepletly?!:iconcryforeverplz:More importantly though..should I continue?:iconurthinkingplz:

:star:These characters aren't mine~:star:
They belong to Crypton!:dance:

EDIT: I finally have the inspiration to continue this thing, so prepare for the constant edits! HUZZAH!!
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